Pretty Crazy

*Edit, changed title.* I'm back! Adjusting to the Dark , The Shapeshifter, action/adventure novels, Please and thank you. :D

I liked it. It's creative and in-depth character-wise. Poor Generator. All he wanted was to please the Master. Sometimes the best stories are the ones that come purely from the ...

Hey you seem un-busy. Would you mind reviewing this? Thank you in advance. :D

Another dragon story, yay! Okay, first of all, it's an interesting idea. But it was a bit too fast and confusing. We don't know anything about this world yet because ...

Hello, I don't really have time to do a long review, but it's always nice just to let the writer know that you liked it, right? So that's why I'm ...

There are seconds before lives are shattered. “Systems set?” The only light source, a red glow from the numerous buttons on the dashboard, edges the man’s face. His jaw is ...

Okay. Interesting concept. I love stories with super powers in them. But really, nothing happened here. What you took a whole chapter to do (introduce the twins, Bell doesn't want ...

To be honest, I skipped a lot of this. It got a little boring towards the middle. However, the mysterious boy watching them picked things up a bit. I would ...

Cool. I want to read more. This is short and sweet, but I don't think it would hurt to post longer segments. ;) Keep it up!

Very interesting. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. ;) I think the others have just about covered the nitpicks. So I'm going to not do any. By the ...

I like it. It's complex and interesting. But really, is someone going to commit suicide just because her grades are failing and she thinks she's too perfect? I don't know, ...

Bats, awesome! I love stories about bats. :) This is kind of like a cross between Warriors and Silverwing . One little thing, not much action besides the hawk scene. ...

Hello, DragonWriter. :) Welcome to YWS! It is my pleasure to give your first review. When I saw the title I HAD to read this! I love dragons too. There ...

Hey there. :) I really like your story, your writing flows very well. The plot is good, but maybe add a few twists to it or something? Just to make ...

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